the growth cover design final

This is the image I went with after some feed back of my thumbnails and what I can improve some it.

This the updated mock up from the thumbnail sketch what I change when I got the feed back on what I can improve is to play with the shadows and lighting to make it dramatic as well as the silhouettes by making one of them smaller and the other to be bigger make it more like the perspective of the child then what the audiences can see.

After I mad this mock up and showed it I got more feed back on what I could to fix what wrong with it and make it better. 

this is another mock up after the feed back on what I can improver from the last one as I was struggling with it all.

the feed back I got back on the previous image was the lighting and the silhouettes they were getting lost as I did not have a strong enough lighting and one of the silhouette are are influenced the way and to improve on iy a bit more as it was also getting lost in the image so I did just that I moved it around a bit and adjusted and I found a good reference for the lighting to improve it and to give the child a teddy bear for them to hold in fear.

after I did this mock up I got more feed back on some other problems such as the silhouettes are over laying to much with the child mainly the teddy and to keep adjusting the silhouettes a bit more and add in the over all text of the cover to the final product.

 This is the final product of the cover I have adjust it to fit the text and hope to convey the message of domestic abuse and the effect on children with my illustration and have improved from the final feed back for this illustration.

over all I think I have convey the message well and done my research as well to give as much as I can improve with this and to show to my audience the message about domestic abuse.